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Starstruck Mae Borowski

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A simple picture of Mae Borowski I did to be used as a thumbnail of my video review of Longest Night, which is a short free game taking place in the same universe as Night in the Woods.

Review of Longest Night in English: youtu.be/yKDd9Hr0LKQ

Polska wersja językowa recenzji gry Longest Night: youtu.be/tSDzGJENvYg
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craftsbyblue's avatar

Hi, I'm here to give your piece a critique :wave:!


I really like the cat's star-struck gaze, reflecting the luminous stars in the sky. I think that the layered purple background contrasts nicely against the cat's orange top, and it adds a mystic vibe to your piece that goes well with the cat's feelings of wonder. Lastly, I really like the design and placement of your watermark; it's very cute and fits well with the style of this piece. Nice work ;)!

I have a couple of suggestions. First, the irises of the cat are noticeably asymmetrical in size, and this results in a lopsided gaze. Additionally, some of the largest stars have a weak glowing effect; for consistency, I suggest increasing the glow radius of these stars a bit more.


Hope this helps, and keep up the awesome work! ;)